NPC skin review #4788

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laylem · 2023-06-17T05:26:45Z

laylem commented

2023-06-17 05:26:45 +00:00

Broken textures:

yl_npc_main_cepheus-amelie.png

missing part of back arms and hands
yl_npc_main_cepheus-amelie.png
missing part of back arms and hands
yl-npc_main_barmaid-leah.png
missing part of back arms and hands
yl_npc_main_druid_m.png
missing back of head, part of back, back arm
part of head is in legs
whole body has textures in wrong places

Duplicates:

yl_npc_main_sailor2.png

duplicate of yl_npc_main_sailor.png?
yl_npc_main_air-sailor2.png
duplicate of yl_npc_main_air-sailor.png?

Art problems:
I feel like the Your Land NPC art should look like Honey, Warrior Princess Zena, Barkeep Otto etc.
I feel it is exemplified by muted colour, textured clothing, and skin that is jsut slightly shaded for more depth.
Many NPC's have problems with uniformly / uniform gradient coloured skin and clothing, or small colour palette, very prominent lines which should be toned down, or various mismatching.
The following are just some of the ones that felt pretty bad.

Dwarves:
Every single dwarf skin had an art style problem. Also, the skin colours don't match.

Convicts:
Symmetrical clothing and skin need to be textured and shaded. Colours are very bold.

Sailors:
yl_npc_main_sailor.png
Wierd brown banding on arm, and chest/facial hair is a little odd looking. Colours are very bold.
(Near-)Symmetrical clothing that needs to be textured.
yl_npc_main_air-sailor.png
Chest hair, wierd lines on arm, colours being symmetical or uniform on clothes.

Pennywise:
Uniform gradients throughout, texturing and shading needed. Is that red disk on the back supposed to be hair? I can't even tell.

Goblins:
The skin colours don't match too.
yl_npc_main_goblin-basic-f-01.png
Clothing, same with eyes and mouth
yl_npc_main_goblin-basic-m-01.png
Face and clothing
yl_npc_main_goblin-buttercup.png
The facial skin is oddly uniform

yl_npc_main_roguemaster-lenora.png
Lines are bold and colour palette is small. See the other Roguemaster Lenora for something that was textured properly.

yl_npc_main_rabenkind-xmas-01.png
Art style is borderline, pants a bit uniform, clothes a bit odd looking, especially the back, and face and hair look a little bland and symmetrical. Would benefit from retexturing and shading.
yl_npc_main_rabenkind-xmas-03.png
Looks a bit too symmetrical, and the face could be better shaded and toned down

yl_npc_main_shipbuilder-trung-ngo.png
Could do with texturing and shading throughout

yl_npc_main_berth.png
Pants and belt could be textured and lines made less bold

yl_npc_main_kika-falchion.png
I'm not sure about the pant/skirt thing. I can't tell what it is.

Skin might be shaded for these ones too.
yl_npc_main_baker_f1.png
yl_npc_main_august-1.png
yl_npc_main_peasant_f2.png

feet colours are mismatched too, one is black other is green
yl_npc_main_captain-zeradia.png
yl_npc_main_peasant_f3.png
also looks a little too symmetrical
yl_npc_main_commoner01.png
yl_npc_main_captain-zeradia2.png
yl_npc_main_air-steward.png
yl_npc_main_rabenkind-xmas-04.png
yl_npc_main_clerk01.png

Broken textures: yl_npc_main_cepheus-amelie.png - missing part of back arms and hands yl_npc_main_cepheus-amelie.png - missing part of back arms and hands yl-npc_main_barmaid-leah.png - missing part of back arms and hands yl_npc_main_druid_m.png - missing back of head, part of back, back arm - part of head is in legs - whole body has textures in wrong places Duplicates: yl_npc_main_sailor2.png - duplicate of yl_npc_main_sailor.png? yl_npc_main_air-sailor2.png - duplicate of yl_npc_main_air-sailor.png? Art problems: I feel like the Your Land NPC art should look like Honey, Warrior Princess Zena, Barkeep Otto etc. I feel it is exemplified by muted colour, textured clothing, and skin that is jsut slightly shaded for more depth. Many NPC's have problems with uniformly / uniform gradient coloured skin and clothing, or small colour palette, very prominent lines which should be toned down, or various mismatching. The following are just some of the ones that felt pretty bad. Dwarves: Every single dwarf skin had an art style problem. Also, the skin colours don't match. Convicts: Symmetrical clothing and skin need to be textured and shaded. Colours are very bold. Sailors: yl_npc_main_sailor.png Wierd brown banding on arm, and chest/facial hair is a little odd looking. Colours are very bold. (Near-)Symmetrical clothing that needs to be textured. yl_npc_main_air-sailor.png Chest hair, wierd lines on arm, colours being symmetical or uniform on clothes. Pennywise: Uniform gradients throughout, texturing and shading needed. Is that red disk on the back supposed to be hair? I can't even tell. Goblins: The skin colours don't match too. yl_npc_main_goblin-basic-f-01.png Clothing, same with eyes and mouth yl_npc_main_goblin-basic-m-01.png Face and clothing yl_npc_main_goblin-buttercup.png The facial skin is oddly uniform yl_npc_main_roguemaster-lenora.png Lines are bold and colour palette is small. See the other Roguemaster Lenora for something that was textured properly. yl_npc_main_rabenkind-xmas-01.png Art style is borderline, pants a bit uniform, clothes a bit odd looking, especially the back, and face and hair look a little bland and symmetrical. Would benefit from retexturing and shading. yl_npc_main_rabenkind-xmas-03.png Looks a bit too symmetrical, and the face could be better shaded and toned down yl_npc_main_shipbuilder-trung-ngo.png Could do with texturing and shading throughout yl_npc_main_berth.png Pants and belt could be textured and lines made less bold yl_npc_main_kika-falchion.png I'm not sure about the pant/skirt thing. I can't tell what it is. Skin might be shaded for these ones too. yl_npc_main_baker_f1.png yl_npc_main_august-1.png yl_npc_main_peasant_f2.png - feet colours are mismatched too, one is black other is green yl_npc_main_captain-zeradia.png yl_npc_main_peasant_f3.png - also looks a little too symmetrical yl_npc_main_commoner01.png yl_npc_main_captain-zeradia2.png yl_npc_main_air-steward.png yl_npc_main_rabenkind-xmas-04.png yl_npc_main_clerk01.png

flux added the

1. kind/other

3. source/art

labels 2023-06-18 02:35:49 +00:00

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